New Architectural Illustration

[steelers05]

Heres my most recent. Hope you guys like it and any feedback/critiques are greatly appreciated.



-steelers05

[Chisel]

Re: New Architectural Illustration

i like it good job. i don't kno what the environment is like but to me glass tends to look more realistic wen its reflecting things other than the sky. i like the people at that scale they look like they belong. again good render and post processing.

[40th]

Re: New Architectural Illustration

Good work. I like environment's background, but like chisel said, if you had something for the curtain wall to reflect, other than sky it would be better.
again good work on the surrounding.

[steelers05]

Re: New Architectural Illustration

Thanks guys. I agree with you and wish I had more time to put more detail in the surrounding environment to get those reflections. We were only able to model what you see in the rendering and that just didnt give me enough reflection. I think if we get to work on this more, I will try to add a little more reflections in photoshop. But thanks again for the feedback, always helpful.

[40th]

Re: New Architectural Illustration

... I agree with you and wish I had more time to put more detail in the surrounding environment to get those reflections.

Yeah, time. The most valuable asset

[nomeradona_cg]

Re: New Architectural Illustration

is this your project. dont know, if its my screen, i feel it lack contrast. the color valus is all subdued. you might want to play more on the sun intensity by lowering it a bit to have a nice contrast.

[steelers05]

Re: New Architectural Illustration

Its not my design but it is my rendering. Are you refering to a lack of contrast between light & dark or do you think that everything is too muted? If it is too muted then it may be your screen, because I have actually got a few critiques about the colors being too satuated and vibrant and when I look closer at it, I kind of agree and would actually tone it down a little bit if we do more work on it.

[nomeradona_cg]

Re: New Architectural Illustration

Its not my design but it is my rendering. Are you refering to a lack of contrast between light & dark or do you think that everything is too muted? If it is too muted then it may be your screen, because I have actually got a few critiques about the colors being too satuated and vibrant and when I look closer at it, I kind of agree and would actually tone it down a little bit if we do more work on it.

now on my laptop is ok... i will be honest that i give up with my monitors they are all displaying different contrast, whatsover inspite of the fact that im using a calibrator.