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    This is a current project I am working on of a small church interiors project.
    Comments and Crits are most welcome.

    - Doweth!

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    Re: Church youth / meeting room

    looks nice ;D
    nice hot coffee smoke effect.

    for the cups maybe try to add more segments to the cylinder and the handle so it looks more smooth.

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    • #3
      Re: Church youth / meeting room

      its ok. material, texuring and lighting. but at the same time indeed consider having unfaceted models when they are close to the camera.
      http://www.nomeradona.blogspot.com/
      http://www.sketchupvrayresources.blogspot.com/
      http://www.nomeradonaart.blogspot.com/

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      • #4
        Re: Church youth / meeting room

        Thanks Remon, Indeed about the faceted materials Nomer. They were off 3d warehouse. In the final I am going to model my own, so I wont have this problem. Thanks for the comments.
        - Doweth!

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        • #5
          Re: Church youth / meeting room

          I think this is a very accomplished render. Lighting, materials etc are spot on.
          However! If I was a photographer shooting this scene, I would clear away the cup and try for something interesting, but too distracting in the foreground. At the moment I think the cup is whimsical, but not whimsical enough - if you know what I mean.
          Still - very good render.

          David
          Sketchup 2015
          Vray version 2.00
          www.davidcauldwell.co.uk

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          • #6
            Re: Church youth / meeting room

            Thanks for the comments; this has been one of my first projects I can actually post, so it’s nice to get some external advice from all the experts.

            David, please explain a little more about the whimsicalness (if that’s a word) of images. I kind of get what you are saying, but I really want to learn some new techniques.

            I will post an update sometime soon.
            - Doweth!

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            • #7
              Re: Church youth / meeting room

              Joe

              What I meant by whimsical, was that the cups appear to be in the scene, to convey something - I thought humour (whimsical
              ). If the cups are not there to convey something - humour, friendliness, cosiness etc. then I would not put them in as in all other respects they detract from the scene, which is otherwise very good - that is all I meant.

              David
              Sketchup 2015
              Vray version 2.00
              www.davidcauldwell.co.uk

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