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Re: URBAN
Very good work, looks quite good!
Some little comments for improvements:
The background image looks a little bit wrong. It's not easy to say why. I suppose so the lens length of the background image isn't the same like for the rendering. The interior could be rendered with a wide angle lens and the background looks like shot with a tele lens. Also the horicon line of rendering and background could be not the same.
Also I have the feeling the DOF effect isn't complete rendered and some blur is add per postwork. At some parts it looks like to much blur at the background and at the first image you seems to blur the skycrapper at the lower window view, but not at the upper window view.
And the carpet show a large repeating pattern.
Once more
- why is there a 10cm gap in the one couch? I have the feeling, this gap should be wider or not there.
Very good work, looks quite good!
Some little comments for improvements:
The background image looks a little bit wrong. It's not easy to say why. I suppose so the lens length of the background image isn't the same like for the rendering. The interior could be rendered with a wide angle lens and the background looks like shot with a tele lens. Also the horicon line of rendering and background could be not the same.
Also I have the feeling the DOF effect isn't complete rendered and some blur is add per postwork. At some parts it looks like to much blur at the background and at the first image you seems to blur the skycrapper at the lower window view, but not at the upper window view.
And the carpet show a large repeating pattern.
Once more
- why is there a 10cm gap in the one couch? I have the feeling, this gap should be wider or not there.
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