room

[booomer]

i get this model from the 3d warehouse to play a little
C & C are very welcome!

[stefanq]

Re: room

Nice render Booomer! Nice touch with the flares

[booomer]

Re: room

hey thanks!
very basic stuff but i like the final result!!
thanks for the comments!!

[nektares]

Re: room

post processing is very nicely done, i like the interior/exterior relation, it looks very natural.
just watch out for that displacement carpet going trough the bed base! cheers! nice job!

[steelers05]

Re: room

yeah i like this image....my only critique is the flair actually...to me, it just takes away from the image. I think it can work nicely, maybe just tone it down a little bit too make it more subtle

[ken28875]

Re: room

Very nice render, Booomer.

Two critiques here:

1- The edge of the ceiling and the left wall seems to disappear, therefore making the wall 2 dimensional. Don't know if you see what I meant, but the first time I looked at the picture i thought the back wall (with the windows) is the same that the one on the left (with the paiting and bed). It's almost like an optical illusion (e.g. Escher drawings)

2- I am not so sure about that blurry guy on the left. Unless you have a reason for him to be there, it's kind of take away from the image.

[booomer]

Re: room

nektares:
thanks man!
i notice the carpet trough the bed just when i upload the image in the forum xD but i'll work and that!
gracias!!!

steelers05
thanks i'm glad you like it
about the flare, it's just a caprice but i like anyway:$ i will take care about it next time becouse this time, and i'm agree with, it's a little too much
thanks!

ken28875

thanbks for the critics and you are right about the ceiling and the blurry guy. i didnt notice the ceiling thing and the blurry guy was just to put on some motion blur because i've never used it and with this render just feel like put it on hahahaha
thanks!


i'll upload the upgrades soon for you to comment guys
thanks for all the comments they are very helpful!