Breakfast render!

[DaveReyes]

this is a simple dinning room actually for breakfast critics and comment are very welcome

[a3rosmith]

Re: Breakfast render!

hi...I get the feeling that the room has no ceiling ..because too much light comes ........

[teofas]

Re: Breakfast render!

Very nice materials, you are improving bro!! keep posting!

[arqestevez1]

Re: Breakfast render!

hi dave... i'm gonna try to help you improve...
-you're gonna achieve much more realism if you mask the borders of your render in the window area. i see a white stroke surrounding de wooden decoration and the aluminium of the window.
-background seems a little too noisy, it should be bigger, blue tone of sky is weird, and it's also too blurred.
-i think chairs would look better if you use less bump and you re scale the map (i think it should be smaller)
-frames on the wall don't have a reflection layer, and if they have, it isn't enogh.
-wood texture is amazing, (actually, could you please share the map?) but you used too much bump, and bump map is not the most adequate. lines between planks should be much thinner.
-you don't have a cristal on the window. i think you're render would look pretty amazing with some reflections.
-in this particular case... you could try to illuminate sceene with an hdri, this will bring reflections to the glass of the tables, the frames and also to the wood and lamp... the best part is that you can still save as a png and use you're sabe background, but with a lot of realistic reflections!

really hope my comments can be usefull.
have a nice day and keep posting

[DaveReyes]

Re: Breakfast render!

Thank you for the comments teofilo and omar and yes i know that have to improve a lot and on the postproduction part and vray.I dont have that much experience in photoshop im playing with it and learning, but omar thanks for your comments and I will try to improve the render.
sorry for my bad english! jejeje

[arqestevez1]

Re: Breakfast render!

pues deberiamos de hablar todos en español y mas facil :P
al teofilo le gusta hacer tutoriales, hay uno por ahi de post producción...
have a nice... night

[a3rosmith]

Re: Breakfast render!

si español seria mejor :P

[stefanq]

Re: Breakfast render!

Yes, keep posting! Looks better than the previous one. Congrats!

[DaveReyes]

Re: Breakfast render!

arqtevez disculpa que no pude responderte ayer no estaba en casa y no tenia internet cerca pero aqui esta el link para el piso de madera y tenes que hacerle cambios en las reflectios glossisness y reflection highlights mis settings son refl gloss: 0.9 - refl highlight: .85, y estoy siguiendo tus consejos para volver a renderizal la imagen y tener mayor calidad a y una cosita mas si me gustaria que compartieras tus materiales de cuero o los que aplicas a los sillones para lograr smoothness !!!!! suerte amigo y que tengas un excelente fin de semana
wood blurry 09 y el 11
link:
http://software.asgvis.com/index.php...limitstart=30# ;

[arqestevez1]

Re: Breakfast render!

gracias dave...
ahora no estoy en mi pc, pero el lunes en la tarde te subo los links.
realmente son sólo difuse + reflection con un smart sharpen filter en photoshop, pero en lo que pueda ayudarte, con gusto.