Exterior (1st attempt)

[averoez]

Hi Community,
Attached an exterior scene I made for a builder, your c&c are welcomed

[edonk]

Re: Exterior (1st attempt)

A few pointers:
Birds are way out of scale, they look like prehistoric pterodactyls!
The building itself is pretty blown out, try tone it down a little and enhance some of the details with an AO pass.
Some of your entourage is out of scale to the rest of the image.
For a first go it is very good, just work on the little things to enhance your image further.

[averoez]

Re: Exterior (1st attempt)

thx for ur comments, here is an update :

[edonk]

Re: Exterior (1st attempt)

Looks better already! Try with less diffuse glow, its just making the large areas of white on the building look 'misty'.

[averoez]

Re: Exterior (1st attempt)

oh ic, here is a less glow one :