living room

[averoez]

Hello friends, attached a simple interior proposal (wip) for a customer.
Plz give me your opinion and criticism.
Greetings.

[skurl]

Re: living room

nice render but lose the couch, i mean get a better softer couch

[rongkon]

Re: living room

The floor is noise and metal of the door is not right. I think you can make it better.
Good luck!

[averoez]

Re: living room

thx for ur comments, here is an updated version :

[shomitsarkar]

Re: living room

Great render...but my observations are:
U have shown sunlight falling in room...means its day time...means its brighter outside...in such a condition u will not get the amount of reflection of the interiors u have shown on the glass panes across the room...this kind of reflection is only possible when its dark outside....may be my suggestion will mean sensible...also the ceiling soffit looks too bright.
I luved the choice of sofa u took in the second alternative....may be add some show items..may be a clock or photo frame in the shelves close to the TV.

[averoez]

Re: living room

thx shomitsarkar for ur comment, indeed useful for next renders
here is an updated version according to all comments :

[averoez]

Re: living room

updated version, hopefully more realistic :-\

[ferrosoa_cg]

Re: living room

updated version, hopefully more realistic :-\

image is good, but chromatic aberration is too much. I dont understand why everybody use this lens artefact. In photography is it undesirable. I know that some graphic designers (Roman Alex ... ) use this method for more reality but that's why for imitate definite kind of film and camera. Chromatic aberration is blemish or feature of lens. Top lenses like Canon L , Nikkor ... try this feature suppress. So use it reasonably

another way good work

[averoez]

Re: living room

thx for your comments, I fixed a little the chromatic aberration:

[rongkon]

Re: living room

Can you share me your model. I want to try to test it. are you ok?