Bedroom- Final Final render (2nd page). Critics/opinions please :)

[indielyness]

Okay, i've finally managed to finish this render completely (i think). I studied Architecture and I am used to harsh critiques, so please be as harsh and picky as you want. I want to improve and that's the best way to! I don't know why, but i'm still not convinced with my results, any tips or things that i overdid/underdid or need?

I've left the first render so you can see how crap it was heh.

Thanks guys

Final render 1600px x 769px (so open in a new window to see it all, the forum crops it)

http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/7...droomfinal.png






First render:


http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/9785/bedroom2r.png

[teofas]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

looking good mebo, maybe a little burn in some areas, also lightning is a little flat and the blanket on the bed has a little blue spot con be something on the geometry, materials are nice, keep posting bro!

[DaveReyes]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

very nice render mebo, you made a very nice carpet some details to fix like burn areas but its a good job!

[DaveReyes]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

Hey try to add a different material to your walls and ceiling, using the same color and a bump texture but very sofe and increase the subdivision!

[indielyness]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

Thanks and yes i will do that to the walls, i put a plaster texture diffuse blended with a light colour as the walls but it didn't quite work out.

when you guys say burnt areas, does that mean light is too bright? for example, the canvas hanging on the wall?

I'll put an updated image up tomorrow at some point, so check it out

[arqestevez1]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

your going to through the path that takes you to the great renders land hehe.
yep, burnt areas means that there´s too much light...

[indielyness]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

Alright guys, here is my latest version, please comment and advise on ways to improve it. I see the shadow under the footstool with noise as one thing in need of improvement, the books shelf looks a bit strange also and the lighting seems a bit colourless i think, and also the curtain made this render take hours longer than before!
thanks


http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/6321/bedroom6.png

[arqestevez1]

Re: 22/08 - 1st render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

greeeat improvement!
try adding some plants in the exterior, or a background and you're done

[paulo_kulot]

Re: 22/08 - 1st render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

Yeah! I agree, some trees on the outside would create nice soft shadows to the inside.... "Here comes the sun... Todoo-doo-doo" Haha, the beatles in the reflection...

[jepoy_cg]

Re: 22/08 - 1st render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

can i ask what version of vray you are using? is it the latest version? the 1.48.66?

your render looks so realistic, can you share your techniques to achieve such realistic renderings?

tnx

[LeoBonilla]

Re: 22/08 - 1st render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

wow, it looks somebody was late for work...poor beds camera always takes pictures when they are a mess.

[Arq.chaconb]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

very good job, I like the lighting com and has been working with the materials of each component espesificamente the blanket from the bed where he has to get it, pordrias share the bed model and texture?


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[Arq.chaconb]

Re: First render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

very good job, I like the lighting com and has been working with the materials of each component espesificamente the blanket from the bed where he has to get it, pordrias share the bed model and texture?


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[indielyness]

Re: 22/08 - 1st render i'm showing you guys. Advice and critics needed please. [WIP]

Okay i am back,

here is the latest render, i've added tree shadows, changed a few things, increased the amount of lighting and added some grass outside the window. Any advice on what to improve and work on now?

It's best if you click on the link to see the image by the way, in this forum images are cut in half and you have to scroll to the right (i didn't realise and only saw half of renders sometimes)

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7038/bedroom7.png





I'm using vray 1.05.30 Jepoy, my advice is to watch the video tutorials on this website as a starting point, read a lot of threads and do a lot of test renders. Also remember that even if something isn't perfect in the render you can fix it in photoshop, it doesn't have to render everything perfectly as long as you can fix it.

Arq, the blanket material is a a white material with a bump map (type: cloth) and the bed is a bed from google warehouse that i modified to make it look like i wanted.

p.s i'm 23, but a massive beatles fan

[indielyness]

Re: Bedroom - Final render. Harsh critics needed!

Added the latest render to first post guys, please comment and critique! Thanks.