Chalet

[rodnez]

Hello guys, this is an image of a project that i've been working on recently; i know that there are lots of things to improve so if you leave me some comments or criticisms they will be a great help.

[teofas]

Re: Chalet

nice work bro! feedback: the background is blur mostly the left side of the image the bamboo leafs are too bright, grass looks a little flat, reflections on windows looks like mirror too reflective, stone and wood textures are great really good materials! keep posting bro.

[arqestevez1]

Re: Chalet

Rodrigo, that stone wall you made looks terrific. did you use displacement, or only bump?
it's one of the most realistic stones i've seen. congrats dude, you've improved a lot

[skurl]

Re: Chalet

fantastic work, i think your grass is nice, maybe you don't want it to look like grass is growing and hasn't been cut, but if you want it to look taller then teo's advice about it being flat is correct, i think your asphalt looks too repetitive, windows are really too reflective as if you have the same curtain as your outside behind the glass, idk if you had to rush this but i see the cut outlines around the trees ans building edges, i always hated that in my renders, as if i added alot of sharpness or is that what you did? for that sunny day i think the image could have been brighter imho. i love this though, alot of work went into this render, how long did you take to make it what what version did you use?

[KELPER]

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I agree I think you can do Grass in PS and place the grass as afterwork and get a better render.

Good work.

[rodnez]

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Thanks for the comments Teo, i will take notes and try to correct those things. I'm glad that you like the stone and wood textures. About the leafs you're totally right, the reflection is too high.

Thanks for the words Omar, i had improved my work but because of you guys, with all the tips you give and looking for you're great work (and i mean it).
About the stone wall i only used bump.

Hi shawn, thanks for leaving me a comment, The grass that i used was one of micha's techniques, it doesn't have any displacement, only bump and i think is too low so thats why it looks flat. About the asphalt well i used the one from sketchup materials (shame on me) hahaha, i was kinda lazy on that momment and i didn't want to check for a better texture but believe me i will. The windows definitely have too much reflection and the cut outlines are there i don't know why, what can i do to avoid this effect, i always save my images from the vray buffer as a png format and i work with that in photoshop but i truly don't know how to correct that.
About how long did i take to make it i think like 8 hours only modeling and probably 1-2 hours looking and appling textures and post work with photoshop was like 1 hour. The render time was 25-30 minutes and i used the last version of v-ray.

[rodnez]

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Hi Kelper, actually i'm not any good in photoshop and i would have to study how to replace the grass from the render into another one much better in photoshop, if you know any tutorial how to do that it will be very appreciated.

[sookie]

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Hello Rodrigo.
there are some white lines surrounding some trees, do you know why is that? because that happens to me.
i like your render the only thing is your grass, its too green

[rodnez]

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Hi Sookie, actually that is one problem that i'm trying to solve but i don't have any idea yet. About the grass i'm still looking for a nice texture but without using displacement because it tooks too much time to render.
Thank you for passing by!

[rodnez]

Re: Chalet

Hello guys, this is an update of the image, i change a couple of minor things, C&C are welcome.

[teofas]

Re: Chalet

update is very good but i still think the same as my first comment, anyway godd improvement bro!

[rodnez]

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Thanks Teo, i appreciate you're words