Wisconsin grocery store

[lukx]

ouch this flair is painfull and I think just road bit less water ponds just bit of wet not water

[glorybound]

I'll have to calibrate my monitor because the glare is faint for me. Yes. the wet road didn't turn out like I had planned

Here is the image with some filters:

[glorybound]

The architects feedback was to bring the sun behind the camera so everything is on light... ugh! it will give me an opportunity to play with the foreground shadows.

[plastic_]

Am I moving in the correct direction on this?

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yes, it actually looks good! I wouldn't have said that for the first version. But I beg you, crop the view and remove those useless cars in the foreground

The architects feedback was to bring the sun behind the camera so everything is on light... ugh! it will give me an opportunity to play with the foreground shadows.

The architect has no clue, I can tell you right away, it will be really bad with the sun behind the camera!

[rivoli]

The architect has no clue, I can tell you right away, it will be really bad with the sun behind the camera!

I think I agree with that..

[peterguthrie]

never listen to architects!

seriously though, speaking as an architect who moved to visualisation, it never does any harm to politely remind your client that you are the one with the expertise in knowing where to position the sun.

In my experience the most problematic area is in composition, the architect always wants to show more than is needed!

[glorybound]

I told him that I would render out a low-res version, showing the son in the position he suggested, but that it would make for a flat image.

[glorybound]

Sun behind the camera

[flino2004]

hello,
I think the roads need more work adding lines.....the car in the frontground looks like is driving fast inside the parking lot...even if you have to fake it, I would put a curb on the botton left corner to have a sense of direcccion
maybe different asphalt color would improve the image.

Fernando

[glorybound]

Here is an update. I am not sure it's going to move anyone, but it is what the architect asked for. Anything that would help make the image better would be appreciated.

[glorybound]

and a quick filter

[MoonDoggie]

I miss the foreground car . Also, there's a large disconnect between tree sharpness from the model trees and the Backplate.

[flino2004]

It looks better!! I think the grass is too dark, the big tree in the middle doesn't look right.... Usually, between roads with that width, it should be something in the range of 10' to 15' height.

Fernando

[ipo]

Sun behind the camera

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I think it could be a good start if you illuminate the stores. Nice sunset mood.

[glorybound]

Okay, I think I am done. I tried different trees, but the architect requested these... anyway... he's happy.