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  • Beach Bar Finally finished

    The archetects finally got it to the clients satisfaction. well. for now hehe.

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  • #2
    very good - your best one to date...
    Just a really minor thing - it looks like the telephone wire should be in front of the roof, as should some leaves to the right of the roof - this would "push" the model into the scene a bit more... But, it's really nice!
    Deano
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    • #3
      hey elf..
      nice photomatch,clean.....

      .btw ..do you know the web address for maco magazine
      davis...

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      • #4
        nice match!!...I agree w/ deano about the phonepole wire.....

        also, IMO, you may wanna take out the trash cans from the foreground - they are a little distracting and not very flattering to the project....hehe

        nice lighting as well...

        paul.

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        • #5
          cool. ill see about fixing the phone wire. i havent heard any comments from the client. it was him who took the photo

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          • #6
            I think the absence of hard shadows (from the sun)
            is somewhat destroying the illusion. I'd suggest adding one
            and referencing the shadows underneath the cars for
            direction, color and intensity..

            Nevertheless it looks cool!
            vertex wrangler

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            • #7
              there is a shadow from the sun. and i used the date time location sun thing to get the angle right and all. See the shadows on the bushes to the right by the garbage? and also....the client did ask me to finally remove the garbage cans hehehe

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              • #8
                Originally posted by Da_elf
                there is a shadow from the sun. and i used the date time location sun thing to get the angle right and all. See the shadows on the bushes to the right by the garbage? and also....the client did ask me to finally remove the garbage cans hehehe
                ugh didn't notice.

                The cg part was prominent and looking at the shadows on the cars,
                my eyes were expecting to find some in the roof area where you
                currently have soft shadows.. Right now there arent and I just thought
                adding one will make the illusion more effective.

                Nevertheless, its a cool image!

                Regards,
                vertex wrangler

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                • #9
                  thats not soft shadows on the top roof there. thats environment light shadows since according to the garbage can shadows the sun is comming from sliiiightly to the other side of the building so you wouldnt see the shadow of that top from the sunlight. but the softshadow you see if the environment light.

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                  • #10

                    Da elf...
                    Cool image, great lighting... but isnt it a bit far away and kinda lost behind the silver car there on the right.
                    regards
                    Hughg

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                    • #11
                      strange situation with that parking lot in the front. first i didn´t find out what you wanted to show us but that´s not a bad sign

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