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  • #16
    Here is the Penske car in it's current state.

    Eric Boer
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    • #17
      A little update, too much blur?

      Eric Boer
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      • #18
        Nah, blur looks nice. The only thing that catches my eye is this.

        The background (sky image) It doesnt match the lighting, based on the lighting, it looks like it would be near sunset. and from the image of the sky its high noon. I say this as well because there is no "real" shadows comming from the truck. BTW GREAT job seamlessly transitioning from your ground plane w/ the rocks, into the background image.

        Other then the lighting match up, it looks great.

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        • #19
          agree w/ lordshaitan, the blur looks good, but the sky seems a bit out of place, maybe too strong since it's starts to compete w/ the foreground stuff......I'd say, probably make it a little more subtle....

          other then that, it looks really good!!!

          paul.

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          • #20
            Thanks for the comments , the colors did get away from me in post. Here's another update. I think I will try adding a Sun for some more defined shadows.

            Eric Boer
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            • #21
              Great image!

              Adding a sun light seems to be the right thing to do. Maybe also add some more MB on the wheels, for the moment they look a little bit flat.

              Again, really nice work.

              Regards,

              Nenad

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              • #22
                Another Update

                Eric Boer
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                • #23
                  its looking great, but there is a problem w/ your "sun"

                  Take a look at the plants and rock on the ground, they have a pretty harsh shadows going right to left, i would try and match this shadow.

                  The soft shadow that you have given the light would suit a cloudy day much beter.

                  Also, id likte to point out somethign that looks MUCH better in this version. Look at the front fender and ther edge of the model above the bfgoodrich sticker. In your older verions because of the contrast the aliaing was bad. In this new version is still slightly there, but its less severe then the one before it.

                  Myabe even turn down the send gi on the ground material, it still looks a little bright under the truck.

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                  • #24
                    The paint change was not a mistake I have "repainted" the entire texture, I enlarged it and painted out most of the pixelation and jpeg compression. As for the sun I think it is generaly coming from the right direction, and it is pretty cloudy, I tried using a direct light and really was not happy with the big block of shadow but you are right, it is not quite right. Maybe I will try altering the shadow on the back plate.
                    Eric Boer
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