Iphone

[shkumbin]

[senior_queso]

awesome!great work

[bardo]

I think the DOF it's too strong.

You should probably have less DOF to have the subject (the phone) more clearly visible.
Another one little thing is the sugar granules on the table. I'll put more granules near the opened edge of the sachet and after spread like you did.

Anyway very good job

[mcel0054]

Agree with Bardo, however, there is a casual, non-product shot, feel to this that is refreshing. Could you tear the paper? it looks like there is a leak in a sealed packet, rather than spill from an open one. Love the thumb prints.

[stevesideas]

You could have cleaned the phone before taking the photo !!!

[sandykoufax]

very nice render!

[KAKTUSDIGITAL]

love the casual presentation. I love the DOF. looks like a 50mm, @ f1.4 or so.

[Pixelcon]

yep love the thumbprints and dust but my fav is the little splash of colour on the home button. well done!