Loft Interior and Exterior

[teofas]

My latest design for a client, a loft in Yucatán, México, your critics are most welcome.

[senior_queso]

well done my friend,i love your photograpic eye! but i would like to see more "drama" in these renderings. Maybe a little more pp or just a vinetting, they look for me too clear!

[teofas]

Thx for the advice bro, i agree, i didnt do it because i didnt thought the client will value a dramatic postpro as much as a clean image to see his house :S But as i said i agree and i also like much more the dramatic looking renders

[deflix]

Hi,

some nice touches in there.
Keep an eye on your Gi granularity - the clock looks like its floating a bit, and other fine details appear without self-shadowing. You can use some subtle AO to help here.
Also the first image is let down by the external wall which is too untextured and flat.

I'm not an advocate of too much post, especially artifact effects like CA or Vignetting which I feel are a bit faddish (like lens flares back in the 90's) but this is just personal preference

[teofas]

deflix, thx for the observations and advice, ill take note for my next proyect, greetings.

[alexclark532]

teofas,

Killer renderings. Love them. I did notice a small flaw on the wood casework above the sink in view "int1s.jpg". I've seen this before in my own renderings and I'm curious if you know what it's from? Other reflections? Occasionally I get the same blotch that looks like a light is shinning on it. Good news is everything looks so damn good it doesn't really matter.

A

[teofas]

Thx Alex! to be honest i thought that reflection was from some light source, but now you let me wondering if its something else, thx for the observation bro, Greetings!

[voltron7]

Some nice work friend.
same comments as others, but I will add...

-brick is tiling a lot...
-wood floor is okay, but looking a bit like plastic/vinyl.
-maroon chairs are a tiny bit jagged
-left side tree looks strange

Nice feel though, and I like the grass, bamboo, right hand side tree.
Overall pleasing images, great job.