Contemporary Home in Minnesota

[flino2004]

these are the new ones, sorrry!!

[paulison]

nice design and looks great but i think maybe desaturate a bit more and add some brightness and possible shadow/highlights in photoshop. thats just my opinion though, everyone has their own style!

[DPS]

I think you need to be a bit more brutal with your curves. I think it lacks contrast.

I would also add a small amount of glow on the white furniture too.

[flino2004]

I'll play around...it looks good on my Ipad, except view two....I think the contrast with the grass is affecting the perception of the other colors....Thanks for the feedback!!!

[cheerioboy]

What about the vertical lines? I'm wondering if it wouldn't help to straighten them.

[DPS]

I'll play around...it looks good on my Ipad, except view two....I think the contrast with the grass is affecting the perception of the other colors....Thanks for the feedback!!!

It's also down to personal preference too of course - I forgot to say I already think it looks good. Are there any trees behind the camera? A shadow across the lower portion of the lawn done in photoshop would help to frame things a bit. I'll post an example if you want - but some people are more/less happy about someone else altering their hard work.

[flino2004]

I have trees all around the house, so yes there are trees behind the camera....I'm trying to limit my work in PS as much as possible since everything is in 3D...I use PS only for color correction, filters & DOF.\
don't worry, I won't sue you

[DPS]

Here's my crack at it:



The mask shown is for a different curves adjustment applied to the grass - but you could do this in 3D.

[flino2004]

It looks better with the shadow!! I will move some trees to get it like that in case I need more views(consistency between them. )
Thanks

Fernando

[DPS]

You could also try and stick a card in front of the sun with a noise map in the cutout slot to simulate clouds. Would need to be almost transparent - just a subtle break up of the light on the concrete panels at the front of the building. May be too much though.