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  • Modern Drop-In Tub

    Me again!

    Been doing some work for a tub/shower manufacturer's catalog lately, which makes for great practice with doing quick little interior shots!

    Here is a recent one: Blender 2.54-2.56, 64-bit Vray, Photoshop for contrast/color adjustment.

    Crits welcome! Slowly getting the hang of Vray, though it still crashes right after finishing the rendering
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    Re: Modern Drop-In Tub

    though it still crashes right after finishing the rendering
    You should definitely mem-test your RAM and send some scenes to chaosgroup.
    Great render btw =)
    V-Ray For Houdini | V-Ray Hydra Delegate | VRayScene
    andrei.izrantcev@chaos.com
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    • #3
      Re: Modern Drop-In Tub

      I like this kind of harmony,
      The only thing I could think of reworking of are the glows at light fixtures.

      I also like the way the main colors are playing in overall composition..

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      • #4
        Re: Modern Drop-In Tub

        I like it as well; very pleasing colors and lighting.

        For critique: I agree with the excessive glow on the bathtub and light fixtures might be a little heavy.

        Everything feels rather boxy, except the lamp and the vase. No woman would purchase a rectangular bathtub. The room is very boxy as is all the furniture. Maybe if the bathtub and lip were oval, and the inside was curved a little more, it would significantly help the boxy/round balance. But if that is the mfg's exact tub, then I guess you can't change it. Maybe you can bring in other round or softer things to balance, like swap the towel and the book, or bring in a plant.

        Finally the baseboard shapes are odd. On the left, there is a 1" gap for dirt to get in. That gap is a different size from the adjacent wall, which is strange. But also having a gap at all is a little odd, at least for american construction. On the corner on the right, the gap extends into a square. It's like a detail that calls attention to itself unnecessarily. When you go into a room, do you want to look at the corners, or look at the center piece?

        The towel looks great!

        Cory
        Cory Petkovsek
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        • #5
          Re: Modern Drop-In Tub

          I set up an account on a forum to ask if you can see somewhere in your new work? You'll throw something else on the forum?
          http://warstwy.com

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          • #6
            Re: Modern Drop-In Tub

            a good one

            what are your settings for the lamp in the background? is it a twosided material? looks very good!
            could you maybe show a wireframe, that its possible to see where the light is sitting?

            cheers
            philipp

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