You be the judge (Added changes to suggestion... updated)

[reza]

this is my first project using vray....i have repaired erros done previously. still need some of your feedback. Help me make it better. thanks.

[s0real]

they look pretty good.
i think the shadows are a bit too dark in the second image though.

[reza]

what do you mean bty red x?

[s0real]

glad to see you got your image hosting problem solved.

[dusan]

I kinda liked the atmosphere in the first one, never mind the mistakes, could you post it as well so we can compare,

i think the sun light is too low and somehow that diffuse shadow in the ceiling is just too strong and too dark

[reza]

Thanks

i should have redused the shadow intensity..
thanks guys...

[dusan]

Sorry, only the new one showed last time i saw this thread. Like i said, the first one looks more real, the second one feels like there is a, god forbid, nuclear explosion outside, the sunlight is too low, althou, the enviromental light from that side is coming in pretty nicely, it looks like some late afternoon.

And actually, now im a bit confused, the sunlight should be low, but not so low, and that very sharp and dark shadow on the ceiling are giving the impression of a very strong and very near light source.

So, the bottom line is, IMHO you should soften that shadow, reduce its intensity, and raise the sun light a bit,

[sunnyc1]

Compositionally I prefer the bright sunlight image. The first does look pretty good although a bit dark as dusan has mentioned.

I've always been a person likes to see contrast. It emphasises spatial vollumes and gives a clear indication as to where a lightsource is coming from.

The only thing bugs me in this image is the lights that look like carrots. They conflict with the rest of the image. The other thing is the dark purple monitor. It looks like there's no GI on that object at all.

Nice images though.

SunnyC