need your comments on my render :)

[giraffe]

[RoarK]

i have always loved the pergola element but the water steals the show! excellent, have u used the "poolwater" shader someone posted up here.
great stuff.

[Dman3d]

Very nice, would add some depth/height to the grass to take it up a notch, the light direction in the background image does not appear to match the sun angle you have, otherwise very convincing.

[RErender]

Looks good, pool looks great. I'd like to see a color change at the footing/screed and some kind of cap or flashing at the top of the parapet and maybe a bit more variation in the stucco, just the bld'g seems a bit plain. Oh and maybe put those chairs back in the dining room

[J_Bug]

The black part of your chairs look like an error. If they are black paint you could give them some specular to define the surface better.

--Jon

[jedisalf]

design issue:

Why are there railings on the first level balconies?, theres no way to go out the house to the pool that way, unless you use a back door we cant see, delete those railings or cut them, and add a few steps to reach the pool level.

[giraffe]

roark: it is simply a vray material with white in refract slot and falloff-fresnel map in reflection and noise map in bump slot.

dman3d: I will try to work on what you say... I am very new to vray... my 2nd render with vray. should I use displacement? what do you advise?
and it is a good idea to put those chairs in the dining to give more depth

j_bug: you are right about chairs. I will try to fix that

jedisalf: architectural design doesnt belong to me. so I really dont know why they did so. but as far as I know this is pool that doesnt belong specifically this villa but they share it with 5 more that arent in view now.
to tell the truth I am only concerned about the cg

[doriziofilho]

Please post you water settings please...
i wish drink one bear in this pool man....

[reza]

Nice

Nice....although i agree with the other comments above..

[giraffe]

here are the settings for the water material

[cgbox]

WOW.....nice

[3drender]

The water is beautiful.

[__Leo__]

Hi Giraffe,

Very nice.. I would like to jump in the pool right now.... (the weather outside is so boring.. so much rain )..

I agree with Dman about the grass..

Lovely work .. congratulations..

Leo

[giraffe]

thanks leo
I must develop my skills for the grass -I am very poor at it.

[__Leo__]

Check this link out.. it has awesome stuff in it ..

grazing sheeps - grass mats for vray:

http://www.chaoticdimension.com/foru...pic.php?t=3526

Leo