no mercy please

[Bowcat]

Critics and comments are very welcome




Thanks.

[mart3z]

Yeah... it's very nice , although I think there are some bugs in the corners, but overall 9.5/10

[Bowcat]

thanks man!!

here goes an other one I don't like, but... I got to learn, right?

[percydaman]

hey I like it! but you just gots to do something about that glaring white in the first image...

[gafl]

Hi Bowcat !

Nice images, sure, but the clouds in the sky, nooo !!
Excuse-me, They are too much artificial, it's a pity !

The scene itself is very good, sunny,realistic, nice job !

Try to find a true sky,

Bye !

Gael

[Da_elf]

looks like a real image of sky to me. nice soft puffy clouds

[percydaman]

I would also give the shadows a touch of blur. they look infinitely sharp and for long shadows it stands out to me.

[ashras99]

Bowcat, nice images. I think little work requires on the textures of the buildings they are very flat.

Which plugin u used for plants and trees or these are images with alpha map.

And ocean in the first one is a image or u create it.

[Bowcat]

Hi everybody!!

Percydaman: About the white... yes, it is kind o' glaring. I started with white at the beggining and never changed it, in fact the architect never said a thing about that. I should be more like gray or concrete. About the shadows, should I manage that with area shadows? I'm not used to that.

Gafl: I think the sky is a photo. I borrowed it from somewhere on the internet. It has no FOV or perspective though.

Does anyone know what are those splotches on the first image?


Thanks for responses!!

[percydaman]

ya some area shadows would look nice. just enough to be obvious on some of those long shadows.

[Matt_3D]

I really like the first image. But I think that the concrete is a little too white.

-Matt

[Viscacha]

I agree with the shadows comment. Usually when dark and light meet (bright white and your shadows) there is a little bit of light bleed almost like a glow which might make the overall image appear more real. Plus the sand in the first image next to drive looks strange. It seems to float, i think the car would be covered in sand if real. I am sure there is a retaining wall there but maybe if you just showed the edge of that wall it would set the sand in place like furthur up in the image (sorry that must be the architect in me...all we do here is architectural renderings) Overall light qualities look very nice...How long did the whole project take you? Are you freelance?
ohhh sky is ok to me but lens flare must go....lol

[zuliban]

the image looks very nice, but too clean for me looks like clay.

[Bowcat]

Viscacha: About the glow, you are totally right. sometimes I want that glow on a window (interior scene) and I don´t know how to do that. Some guys here can. I´ll might post a topic on that. The project took about a week, I´m freelance; and... hey! I like the lens flare! .

Zuliban: yeah, that is a step in 3D that makes an image look like a photo and not as a render. It tooks time I think, and time is gold in this business.

Thanks for your comments!

[grimrepoman]

I'd say the plants look a little sketchy...I'm seeing some white fringe in some of the bushes. The lensflare doesn't help the image either.

Other than those points, it's absolutely lovely


Christian