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Looks nice, but it's too cyan and not blue enough
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Great work. To be picky:
- On the front image, I'm disturbed by the green/red hedge on the latests images update. But maybe it's like that. The front hedge is full summer green and the other too aged maybe ?
- On the back image the big hedges separating the +0 apartmens are too curvy and look boxmapped ?
- The night image is too bright imo, misses focus on the building. I would push exposure down in CR
Overal awesome greenery work and foreground/background. Some serious patience in there
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- On the front image, I'm disturbed by the green/red hedge on the latests images update. But maybe it's like that. The front hedge is full summer green and the other too aged maybe ?
Well one is always green regardless of the season; the other looses its leaves in autumn/winter.
- On the back image the big hedges separating the +0 apartmens are too curvy and look boxmapped ?
Well it's actually a forest pack on top of a geometry but I agree I'm not happy at all with the result (You don't really see the leaves). About the too curvy: it does exist:
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Although not the same (I didn't want that effect); curvy is possible; But I agree I didn't really succeed in modeling a convincing hedge there. Still need to work on my organic modeling skills
- The night image is too bright imo, misses focus on the building. I would push exposure down in CR.
The raw render is actually a bit darker. Will try to bring it down a bit.
One thing that is bothering me is that I have great contrast here on my calibrated monitors. But when I look at the images on different monitors or smartphones, they lack it. And when I print them they are almost washed out. Are they lacking contrast with you guys too?Comment
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Well maybe there is too much red in the hedge, should be more yellow/orange and a tiny bit of red. But it's my opinion, no offense
The night one misses contrast, watching it on a Dell P2715Q factory default. Others seems good.
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