Christian School

[glorybound]

I have clue on how to make this one nice. Basically, it's a white stucco box.

[andybot_cg]

Nice start. I would definitely work on the landscaping. I think it will look much better if it's integrated into some greenery. A lot of foundation plantings, some ornamental trees, etc.

[glorybound]

Unfortunately, there isn't any landscape, other then some plants on then left side of the building.

[andybot_cg]

No freedom to make stuff up for this project? It was just a suggestion for enhancing the rendering.

[glorybound]

I guess I can. I asked for a landscape plan and he said that there will be 5 bushes along the one wall. I'll have to play around, it needs help.

[dlparisi]

Add in some stucco joints? How about proper delineated playground area (mulch, rubber playsurface, etc)? Hard to believe that the playground would just be put in the grass like a backyard.

Maybe it's just the higher camera angle, but the kids around that playground in the first image look a bit small as well. I'd definitely lose the foreground girl as well.

[glorybound]

I wasn't sure they would allow me to put a playground there, so I kept it simple. They didn't say anything about it, so I'll put more love into it. The foreground kids are on top a hill; the site drops down 10'. I agree, she is an annoying little brat

[dlparisi]

I was referring to the kids at the bottom of the slide, they look too small even for toddlers.

[snivlem]

In very poor architecture I usually try and distract with people. Get a kid flying a kite in there or something really interesting to try and steal the eye away.

[glorybound]

I think that, that'll be my objective.

[Morne]

Looks nice so far, maybe mirror the sky in the 2nd image, or use a different one than the 1st

[particlerealities]

I think they look pretty good overall. The close-up girl in the first shot is distracting. If you look at the horizon line in relation to her, she's either jumping very high on a trampoline, or standing on a ladder (and about to fall off).

2nd image - the closest palm tree doesn't seem to be touching its shadow on the ground.

The images feel kinda blurry to me, but it could just be my eyes this morning...

[glorybound]

I am going to totally rework these, so hopefully they'll improve greatly next time you see them.

[werticus]

Photoshop jesus into the sky, and remove that kid in the forground who is really distacting:

http://christian-backgrounds.com/chr...783bd11700.jpg

[glorybound]

I am having a rough time making these look good. If all else fails, I'll put a Jesus n the sky.