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[foro3d]

Greetings Friends: ¶
¶This time show in the forum my last work, not yet finalized, so that tell me suggestions and commentaries of like improving it. ¶
¶Thanks in advance. ¶



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[Da_elf]

nice image. im sure it will stand out in that neighbourhood with that color are the roof tiles modeled?

[foro3d]

Yes the roof tiles are modelled, but only what you see in the image
..and the color.....hehe....is a cool color, in a hot day

[percydaman]

man who picks these color schemes? Aside the from colors its a well done image.

[didjaja]

Very very good lighting
Worst asfalt and man in second picture and please,correct this violet color and you have a impressive image
Por cierto,tienes algo que ver con 3dpoder?Lo digo pq hay un foro3d en la red

[dusan]

Looks great but too saturated for my taste! could you try with regular logarithmic instead of HSV logarithimc?

[foro3d]

oks, then....a less saturated images ....(i have modified the first post images ) Better now?

[olivierfR]

Hey !
i quite like the overall contrast of the image ( it feels like a sunny day..)...and the color is ok ( a bit saturared maybe..).

But in the first image, the backroung image is not well defined..should be more contrasted like you rendering.
and what is this strange orange stuff in the shaded facade, under the roof ?? i guess .. architectural detail well done...
and the discontinuity between the two level of roof ? strange .. you go from concrete (stone) to wood or whatever ??? architectural detail well done !! but it is problably not your problem...

and is there any pavement in this city ??? the builing on the road that's it ! you should defenitly put someting ther, this might give more depth to the thing !


in the second image, the background definitly do not fit ! ( blurry ...)
the guy do not fit...specially his shadow...and his clothes also ( it's looks like he is going for surfing on the snow...)
also, strange detail about the column in the corner ! it is like it was disturbing the architect, "nevermind let's put it here, the building needs it otherwise ..."

but beside my CC, i still think that the image is really nice but could much much better !

[foro3d]

Real photos...

To olivierfR:
- > But in the first image, the backroung image is not well defined..should be dwells contrasted like you rendering.

Yes, the bottom is blury a little and has less saturation to try to give more depth to the image

- > and is there any pavement in this City? the builing on the road that's it!

Well, at the moment the construction is thus, without asphalting like can see in real images that I put here.

- > the guy do not fit… specially his shadow… and his clothes also

you are in the certain thing, the truth it is that it was placed to give to the client a scale reference there, but is a bad integration, I know it.


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