Prayer & Cycle Building

[PGD]

Here's a recent project of mine, a Prayer & Cycle Building for the city of Sheffield (seems like an odd combination of building usage but hey ho!)

I'm interested in any comments or critique as I'd really like to improve my work.

I have no part in the architecture by the way, just the imagery.


Prayer & Cycle Building by Phil Grayston, on Flickr


Prayer & Cycle Building by Phil Grayston, on Flickr


Prayer & Cycle Building by Phil Grayston, on Flickr


Prayer & Cycle Building by Phil Grayston, on Flickr

Due to time restraints the surrounding buildings haven't been modelled in and detail, though I admit it would look better if they were.

[prateekvishwa]

Awesome work! Day light & dusk, both looks amazing! I loved the foliage in front of main building. Block models in background are making images look little conceptual type renders but overall all the images are visually appealing. HDRI?

[PGD]

Thanks

They are hdri yes

[glorybound]

Yes, nice work. Nice and warm.

[PGD]

Thanks guys

Feel free to add any crit people

They look very CGI to me, and I'd like to improve that - but I'm not sure how. It all looks very clean, too clean perhaps, especially the paving. What do you think?

[AlexP]

I like them and the building design.
Obviously the main improvement to start with to diminish the CG effect would be proper surrounding and background. ie. replace the grey buildings.