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  • 1 of 10 .... : )

    Started this 3 hours ago ... its got to be finnished by the end of the day..
    still need's stuff doing to it ..like spots and curtain mat is way of..

    so all crits and comments all welcome to improve ..


    Natty
    http://www.rendertime.co.uk

  • #2
    Master of glass
    Is the room light up just with those 3 vraylights? Pretty cool.

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    • #3
      Hi Natty,

      I am beginner in this field. Started learning though your tutorials. and A lot of help a lot from Kippu.

      I really cant say much as i still have to learn a lot.

      Few things i can say is - Where is the Green color comming from.
      Also the floor near the camera is somewhat strecthing, is the Camera too close from the Floor. Its what i feel.

      One more thing. Can you show that Glass settings please. Sofas / Couches are looking nice.

      There are different boxes that are seen. Even i face it is it because of the quality is Low at the moment.

      Thanks,
      Regards.
      Inxa

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      • #4
        I still need to add the spots Inxa..
        still need's stuff doing to it ..like spots
        Which glass do you want to see ? there are 3 different one's ..
        Natty
        http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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        • #5
          The glass on the table

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          • #6
            Hi,

            Yeah glass on the table.

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            • #7
              Sure guy's ..

              Natty
              http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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              • #8
                Nice lighting, especially to get away from the too clean (clinic) white look.
                Just get rid of the bands on the ceiling (I suspect from the 3 Vray light).

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                • #9
                  yeah they are from vray light ... seems to be a small bug in the beta ..
                  Natty
                  http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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                  • #10
                    Looks a bit flat to me. The table needs more details because it's the focal point, but I think you know that. After all, 3 hours work, hehe.
                    William
                    TSE

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                    • #11
                      its a reception counter ... that just the front of it .. : )
                      Natty
                      http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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                      • #12
                        I think its design is too simple.
                        William
                        TSE

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                        • #13
                          there is more stuff to happen in there ...this design is for the ITV television Company .... they want it Cool, Crisp, Clean, and Minimal ...
                          Natty
                          http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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                          • #14
                            clean work as usual, what are these shadows on the ceiling ,i don't understand them, are they shadows?
                            did u use photons?
                            Have you tryed a red painting to create a contrast with the ambient color?

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                            • #15
                              hey natty,
                              nice work. the main problems were already said.

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