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[jet crow]

C&C welcome
[img]ftp://staging.frontex.com/3dmov/Complete/web.jpg[/img]

[Dynedain]

cant see your image

[jet crow]

Mysterious i see it
Maby problem is ftp server which from i upload it. Give please some free upload site, cant found it

[Dynedain]

now it works, may just be a slow server

I think you've done a fairly good job compositing the image, and the grass looks very nice, here are my few criticisms without getting into the architecture design (which is not as good as the rendering).

Your roof is stopping short of the gutters, you can tell by the gap of light in the shadow over the garage and other areas. This means that the water would just run off the roof and never get in the gutter.

The gutter downspout is too far away from the house, normally its flush up against the wall.

The front door should probably be a big solid door, what you've put in is more suitable for a porch or backdoor.

The windows to the right of the doorway are too high up and are interfering with the gutter/roofline...notice the height of the handle on the door, and then where the bottom of your big picture window is...you probably need to lower the windows on the side as well.

The railing on the back balcony is way to tall, you have it at almost chest-height.

If the roof material is copper, its nice, but needs more variation in it from weathering...looks to even, if it is supposed to be tile, well then you have some work to do

The skylights in the roof are a nice touch, but they need to poke out of the roof, not be inset, otherwise water would pool on them and leak into the house.

The gutter on the long slope of the roof needs to be removed. It doesn't do anything and any water in it would never make it into the downspout because of the speed it would pick up going down that steep slope.

I think the grass material is scaled slightly too large, try reducing it to about 50% of what it is. Also I like the shadow on it, see if you can make the shadow darker though (the big one from the tree across the bottom of the image)

I'd replace the Audi with something more economically appropriate for a house such as this...perhaps a Toyota or VW.

The grooves in your garage door can be a bit thinner/lighter as well.

What did you use for the yellow tree in the foreground? I like it...and I think the background matching is pretty well done

[jet crow]

Dynedain thanks for your comments. Few words about this job, architecture part is not my job i just build it by blueprints & give this horror pretty view (i hope) & gutter & other I don't like it too.
Foreground yellow tree its Onyx pro 6. I ajust all v-ray mats for it. Specially leaves mats with affect alfa function exclude some errors.

[reza]

there is a gap in between the flowerbed on the right and the wall...under the 3 windows to the right.

[Mark David]

well, i liked specially the glass in your windows, do u mind to share that material?

Thanks and congrats

[jet crow]

ooops

marcocohen tower windows is the one thing what was photoshoped 1 day work guys