Surreal Structures - Office 1 Update

[Trapezium]

Looking really amazing Linda All of the materials look right on. Your clients are getting cinema quality work. I hope they pay you good.
--Jon

[UBIKmh]

Well done. The glass and the thermos are realy amazing.

Marc

[ml-a]

That pollock doesn't look like a painting and I suppose that must be bigger too. I'm not sure.
Great lighting.

[Frances]

Thanks everyone for your kind and constructive comments.

In a way, I agree with Gijs about the sunlight and I have been undecided about whether to use direct sunlight or not. But maybe if the source was apparent it wouldn't be distracting. This is just a crop render of the overall scene, so you can't see where it's coming from.

As for the Jackson Pollack, the original size of the work would not have "fit" in the space, but I admired the color palette and thought it was "fitting" for the space.

[Syclone1]

overall looking very nice Fran

-dave

[Frances]

I never put people in my scenes, but I added a People For People person behind the obscure glass. Does it work?

[percydaman]

it might work. Would probably look better if the blurriness of the glass was toned down a little.

[timmatron]

I like it!

[Frances]

it might work. Would probably look better if the blurriness of the glass was toned down a little.

Are you familiar with people for people? Blurry is good.

[percydaman]

haha I said "a little"

[nanabaky]

No, i think it doesn't work with the character... Much better without her ! Or if you really want a char, maybe, you could seat her on the chair behind the blurry panel but making it's forearms getting out the blurry area (and why not with a cup o coffee), but it's a lot of work, i guess !

[Frances]

Thanks for the input everyone. I've decided to leave the lady out of the scene.

[zerofractal]

Maybe a cutout person photo behind the blurry glass would look better. The people for people model loos stiff . BTW GREAT IMAGE!

[Frances]

Thanks for the suggestion Alejandro, but with a modeled person, you get a play of light that you can't get with a billboard.

[haneet22]

fran sorry for being late
can u post ur wire and settings