Corporate WIP

[bpozas]

The wood panel sont have relections yet, but thats the only thing I'm going to change, pointers are welcomed.

[Frances]

Pointers? You're kidding, right?

Wow!

[DaForce]

wow, very very nice work!!!

[cocolas]

as always your work is ecxelent.......yeah I'd say the only thing is the glossies on the wood......the water is perfect.....and i love the stainless on the column.....lighting is great as well...

do you have any other lights besides GI and sun??
how long did you work on it fron start to finish......


great work, man



PS: I also like the design on this one.....the water pond in the middle of the conrridor is really cool....


paul.

[Trapezium]

Wow, the design is like a dream. Excelent rendering as always

--Jon

[Zero One 010110]

Well Bernardo,I do have some pointers though, personally, i think that water is very wrong, it looks like mercury, i think that a lot more clearer water with a little bit of glossiness (like .93) with some rocks on the bottom should do the trick, with some fresnel reflections of course. Also, i've seen some much better frosted glass from you, i think that the "block" material on the squared arches is very unrealistic, and the selection on the colors of the trees is very simple, again, i've seen better trees from you as well, so i quite dont get what happened!!
Maybe we can chat some day, i too live in Monterrey you know...

Thanks!

[percydaman]

I agree with Zero about the water, it needs some refraction, THEN itll be perfect

[caustic angel]

why not add some little area-shadows?

[bpozas]

thanks for the replys, I've only worked with this image for about 6 hours in total, the client wanted a same day image and I had to use materials from other files without time for adjustments.

About the water the mercury look is on porpouse, I saw a waterfall made out of black metal and the water looked like that, I tried the rocks on the bottom but I tought it was kind of standard and boring. So the idea was to get different look on the water.

About the trees, I have to agree that this are not the best, but I tried the tree bitmaps and for some reason they were turning out all burned out and with a short deadline the 3D trees were my only way out and the area shadows look much better but the render time was a factor again.

[nikulu]

6 hours?! I am going to pass out......

[mcphep]

fantastic job!
this space deserves more than six hours. the client needs a kick.
maybe if the trees were darker they would be less obvious.

[carlosark]

maping an ilumination are very great.... like it !!!
the water material is exelent !!!
i like this render !!!!
congratulations
(como siempre, el trabajo ...muy mamalon k !!!)

[Syclone1]

nice work for the short deadline I love the floor.

-dave