test render

[dench]

hi guys i'm new here



c&c crits pls

[gafl]

Hi Dench !

Welcome to the forum !
Your picture is very good, congratulations.
The window is strangely put on the wall...

Bye
Gael

[dench]

thanks..i'll try to work onthat..tnx again my friend

[natty]

Yeah welcome DAC .... like the slight Bump you have on the tile's ....

[arquiteck09]

i like the materials , a lot !!!!

[dench]

gael - i'm sorry but that's not a window..it's some sort of a lighting fixture

thank you guys..i hope i get to see your works too

[olivierfR]

great...!
for the lighting fixture...to make believable ( i also thought it was a small window..), maybe put some yellowish blurred tint in the corner...like a inside glow...maybe that's an idea...

[dench]

hi guys..tried working on this one..how do I create water flowing out from the faucet..is there any tutorials around for that?



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[blueplanet]

nice tile

Really love the subtle bump mapping on the ceramic tile.
It would be interesting to use a displace map on the bar of soap too!
Can you show us your material setup for the ceramic tile?

Byebye
Naomi

[dench]

olivierfR - I tried tweaking this one for you...im not sure if it's correct


blueplanet - just use this as your bump map...maybe you could also explain to me the meniscus principle again..and i was just wondering how water reacts when it collides with another body of water..maybe you can help me out on this one?..tnx guys

[olivierfR]

hey...ok..but in my opinion,....should be slightly more contrasted in the blurred corner of the light...

[Nenad]

Hi Dench, nice work! Those must be some robust plants above the closet Maybe try decreasing the displacement on the towel a bit.

About the light fixture : OlivierfR, in the example you've posted, notice that the frame is under the white surface, which justifies the grey falloff. In this scene, the frame is set above the white part so I guess there is no need for the internal shadow.

[Linda]

Nice! my only crit for your pics are that i think the edges are a little bit to sharp imo otherwise good job

It looks like you have used sharp effect in photoshop?

[dench]

nenad - thanks! but both are actually correct depending on the type of lightbulb you use.if you try an incandescent bulb for that lighting fixture then the light would be quite evident at the middle part..while to an energy saving one the diffuser would be properly diffused.

spirit - thanks!let's just say that im the opposite of those who try to blur their images.try to lessen it next time