Cyberpunk Girl WIP

[Trapezium]

Just wanted to get some comments on my latest character. She's got quite a way to go still. My girlfriend's helping me design the clothing.

All VRayMaterials
5 VRayLights + GI
Only using new Hilight feature (except for lenses)
@ current settings, rendering about 7-8 min for closeups and 3-4 min for full body.

I'll eventually replace the meshsmooth with VRaySubDs along with displacement on the clothing.



C&C welcome.
Is she too cliche?

Thanks,
--Jon

[Fastdraw]

dude that looks like my ex
holy cow
nice

[natty]

Good work Jon . .
what are you future plans for her ?

[Syclone1]

Nice job indeed Jon, well proportioned

-dave

[Trapezium]

Thanks all,

She's inspired by a Flaming Lips song about a girl called Yoshimi. I thought I'd have her bust up some old school Anime looking robots.

I also created her to solidify a bunch of stuff swimming around in my head about methods to composite character animation into a scene using GI with lowered render times in mind.

In the end she's for my demo reel

--Jon

[natty]

cool .... ive got the Album ... i imagined her to be more Punk .. more hard.. but sexy .. you got the sexy bit.. heheh

[Trapezium]

I think we got the same impression from that song, maybe just a slightly different interpretation.

She is punk ... inside

When I first heard the song I thought of this inner power where she's a sexy teacher, or something similar, by day and a robot smasher by night. So when she changes into this outrageous getup she's flying through the air making some crazy-kabuki-mask-samuri-faces and screaming. After she shoots/ slashes/ pummels then her face turns all cool like Elvis to the point that she has to snap out of it for the next robot.

Kida a wild idea, again;inspired by animations like FLCL, but even if I don't get around to those crazy facial expressions at least I can build a still pose with this as a back story in mind. I'd probably make one of her in her teaching outfit backed up against another of her in this garb and peaking around a corner from the dark with her blaster/ sword drawn.

I'm gona work on her makeup soon, not sure how wild yet but it may give her a little edge.

--Jon

[DaForce]

Very nice!!
As said before very nicely proportioned

I like the detail around her neck/clavicle area.

Well done, cant wait to see her animated with abit of bounce in her...ahhh....step...yeah thats it..

[zuliban]

really nice i like a lot lovely character

[TishoChaos]

Hi Jon!

Your character is awesome. Did you import her from Poser or modeled in max? If modeled, how long did it take you to complete modeling/texturing? Nice proportions as it has already been said, only thing bugging me a bit, and I am not very sure about it - shouldn't her ear be a biiiiiit smaller and a biiiiit positioned upwards, just a little, so the top of the ear is on the line with the eyes and the bottom on the line with the mouth/nose?

Did you do the texturing with unwrap? How long did it take you to make the texture in photoshop? Is the clothing extruded faces then polished and detached?

Great work man! Please rig her and make her kick someone with a matrix effect

[percydaman]

nice model dude. agree with tisho about the ear though. give her a sexy pose man, women like that aren't supposed to be viewed in a "T" pose...lol

[TishoChaos]

haha percy, do you have in mind a "V" pose instead (whatever you may think it is) or you just want to see the character animated?

[percydaman]

no I just want to see her hand on her hips, her back a little arched, her weight on one foot, waist a little turned, looking straight into my eyes..... hehe

ps. dont know of a "V" pose. must be a bulgarian thing?... lmao

[Nenad]

do you have in mind a "V" pose instead

[TishoChaos]

yes, Nenad, I think you got it - percy, seems to had not taken it!