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  • 6th and B

    I am undecided on this one, so far. The challenge was to make six brick boxes attractive. I tried some atmosphere and played with some extreme depth of field. I think the people on the corner shot might need to go, or at least the two girls and the birds were an attempt to fill in the empty foreground. I'll look at it again, tomorrow morning, with fresh eyes.

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  • #2
    I like the birds on the ground, but not sure with the two girls...
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    • #3
      Yeah, I took both the girls and birds out. I also took away the fog and the DOF. Too much stuff is going on already. I'll post an update in the morning.
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      • #4
        Looking nice!
        I liked the mood and how you played with vegetation to add life to the images
        the pink bushes are a bit too much saturated imo
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        • #5
          I liked the girls. The couple hugging on the front porch are distracting I think. I agree about the pink bushes - they draw too much attention to the blurry forground.
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          • #6
            Some updates, which I think is much better.

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            • #7
              A warming LUT. I need to add something in some windows for these, so I am going to do a dusk shot, too.

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              • #8
                Nice, everything look balance now.
                the one with purple bush, the grass in front look too neat to me...
                The lexus car lamp reflection look weird...
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                Jackie Teh
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                • #9
                  Some subtle, but necessary tweaks.

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                  • #10
                    wow! the front grass look great now...how you do that, could you please share some tips?
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                    • #11
                      Just something I learned on this forum

                      http://bobby-parker.com/architectura...-perfect-grass
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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by glorybound View Post
                        Just something I learned on this forum

                        http://bobby-parker.com/architectura...-perfect-grass
                        Nice tutorial you have there, i haven't try psd manager before, will give it try in future
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                        • #13
                          I would suggest on the second shot to show some space on the right, the building is too near the edge.
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