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Personally I think that if you stood back and gave your work some harsh criticism, you may find a few areas to improve on. The image is really close to being good IMO but theres a few obvious issues, no doubt 100% down to timeframe and client decisions
Even if the job is done and client happy, for personal reasons and also maybee for your folio you should make a list out of every possible criticism of your work that you can see. It would be great to see you more happy with this work and finish it off to the standard you personally want to acheive
I think foreground planting, driveways and masking of 2d elements are the main areas that need attention but the building looks great IMO even with lower GI settings. I think some of the forms could stand out more with a slight tonal variation in the wall render. For example, beams and dado's may have a smooth white finish, where the walls have a texture finish.
Honestly though, you could pick more holes in MY work so i cant be more critical of yours
Even if the job is done and client happy, for personal reasons and also maybee for your folio you should make a list out of every possible criticism of your work that you can see. It would be great to see you more happy with this work and finish it off to the standard you personally want to acheive
I think foreground planting, driveways and masking of 2d elements are the main areas that need attention but the building looks great IMO even with lower GI settings. I think some of the forms could stand out more with a slight tonal variation in the wall render. For example, beams and dado's may have a smooth white finish, where the walls have a texture finish.
Honestly though, you could pick more holes in MY work so i cant be more critical of yours
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