a very simple home

[ahmedabdelwahab]

first of all i would like to thank arqestevez1 too much for his useful tutorial ,i learned a lot from this forum ... really thank you everybody for helping me to improve myself ... actually i started practicing those new techniques in a very simple home i modeled it and the start was in the time that i check the tutorial of Omar ,i got inspired me too much ,and the results encourage me to continue ,and today i just want to share my work with all of you my friends ... feel free to leave your comments it can help me to improve more myself ... again i want to say thank you so much for everybody.

[ahmedabdelwahab]

i can see 19 person view the thread until now but no body left any comment ...

[andybot_cg]

don't take it personally, that's just how this forum is sometimes.
Your lighting seems nicely balanced and you have a nice interior environment in the house. One thing I might work on is giving the exterior architecture some more detail - that red wall wants some texture perhaps?

[glorybound]

I agree with Andy... I would play with views, too. My eye seems to be wondering all over your scene. Good job, BTW!

[ahmedabdelwahab]

don't take it personally, that's just how this forum is sometimes.
Your lighting seems nicely balanced and you have a nice interior environment in the house. One thing I might work on is giving the exterior architecture some more detail - that red wall wants some texture perhaps?

thank you andy i will try to fix it and i will post the result ... i appreciate your comment

[ahmedabdelwahab]

I agree with Andy... I would play with views, too. My eye seems to be wondering all over your scene. Good job, BTW!

thank you glory ... i appreciate your comment

[ahmedabdelwahab]

i tried to add some water to the out door side

hi my friends ... i just add some water to the pool in the out door side ... and i apply a texture to the red wall ... please feel free to leave some comments it can improve me more ... thank you so much

[fpedrogo]

Looks good! My only comments are the sharp edges and the quality of the floor texture. Try to avoid sharp edges and use a better quality texture for the floor. Beside these, the render look great. Nice water!

Best

[ahmedabdelwahab]

Looks good! My only comments are the sharp edges and the quality of the floor texture. Try to avoid sharp edges and use a better quality texture for the floor. Beside these, the render look great. Nice water!

Best

thank you my friend for you advice ... but what you mean by avoiding the sharp edges .. you mean to avoid it totally in my design or in some parts of the design or to just chamfer all the edges ?... and regarding the quality of the floor texture ... you mean the resolution or the material should be totally changed ?... thank you so much

[fpedrogo]

Yes, you need an image with better resolution, specially when you have a closeup of the concrete like you have. Sharp edge take off realism of the render. You don have to round the edges if the geometry is far away from the camera, but if the object is close to the camera you need round edges. In your render I was referring to the border of the pool. But as I said the sharp edges can kill any render.

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[ahmedabdelwahab]

Yes, you need an image with better resolution, specially when you have a closeup of the concrete like you have. Sharp edge take off realism of the render. You don have to round the edges if the geometry is far away from the camera, but if the object is close to the camera you need round edges. In your render I was referring to the border of the pool. But as I said the sharp edges can kill any render.

Best

thank you my friend ,now i got what you mean ... i appreciate your advice.

[fpedrogo]

Hi
You are very welcome!

[nimajalali@aol.com]

Very nice work Ahmed,,,, I appreciate it so much,, some pros and cons if you don't mind:
Pros: (1) water and glass material are perfect, I'm so impressed about the water would you kindly mail me the vismat file? nimajalali@aol.com
(2) the interior work seems so good
Cons: (a) yeap,, sharp edges! put some detail on it, not just chamfer,,
(b) the purple flower in the right side of the building grabs so much attention,,

the lights are perfect toooooooo,,,,
NJ

[arqestevez1]

hey there ahmed.
i'm a little late in this post...
and wow.. the pool image looks terrific. i agree with fernando about the edges.
your illumination is great, congrats!
i see a lot of improvement from one picture to another.
i'm glad you found my tutorial usefull. see you around!

[artupato]

^to arqez: yes your tutorial really helps! haha this is my first post since the migration

@amedab:
nice work on the water and ripple effects!
good lighting too.
cons:
(they said it already)

congrats!