modern living and dinning room

[DaveReyes]

hello asgvis community have a great holidays and a happy new year and great renders for 2010. This a render wish i created most of the furnitures i just use the chairs that i found in the google warehouse. Also the painting its from a artist of my country Managua Nicaragua.
Critics and comments are welcome

[stevebo]

Re: modern living and dinning room

Happy holidays!

The render is quite clean so good job on that!

I think you should have modelled the chairs as well since I think your furniture looks far better than the chairs. The chairs are very "stiff" if you get what I mean. If that is meant to be a cushion, a cushion is supposed to be soft and not have sharp edges.

The background image doesn't quite match the lighting from the sun.

The reflections in the image are quite nice although they may be a bit too reflective on the ceiling and table. I like the reflections on the wooden floor .

I like the two slit windows that are in the living room, but I think it might be better without them in a way. Particularly because you have a television there. I feel like the slits would be too much of a distraction.

Lastly, the pot and base on the table seems a bit odd. It seems too bright. Maybe too much reflection?

Sorry for the amount of criticism. Don't get me wrong... rendering wise, the quality is very good. I just think these points would make the image a bit better. Have fun rendering!

[DaveReyes]

Re: modern living and dinning room

thanks for the comments stevebo, and i agree have to make some changes to improve mu render!!!

[DaveReyes]

Re: modern living and dinning room

im trying to find some blocks for the dinning chairs and i havent found something good, so acttually i will have to model the chairs.

[stevebo]

Re: modern living and dinning room

im trying to find some blocks for the dinning chairs and i havent found something good, so acttually i will have to model the chairs.

You could always find something that is a bit off but near enough to your liking, then tweak it to fit your needs in SU.

[DaveReyes]

Re: modern living and dinning room

;D thanks dude

[DaveReyes]

Re: modern living and dinning room