OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.

[EmilioB]

sup ;D

so anyway my crappy internet has been down for AGESSS, so i thought i'd bash out a nice outdoor render trial with a few visopts ive been messing with, turns out this is quite an excellent render and i like it very much so

comments and criticisms in and around my mouth.

superb


oh yeah and ignore the fact that you could probably walk off the edge quite easily and die... thanks ;D... and that the sunlounger on the left is floating, ignore that too ;D

haha x

[stevebo]

Re: OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.

Including your signature thing, there are four different forms of profanity in your post. A little unnecessary and excessive don't you think? With that said, I find it difficult to take you seriously. But I'll try my best for some comments.

The render itself is quite clean. The materials could do with some better textures though. Try cgtextures for some nice textures and try creating some bump maps to add some depth and realism to the materials. Currently, the wood textures are very flat and the colours are a bit unrealistic.

The background needs some colour correction. Or could do with a different background... the image quality isn't that great.

[sbarbo]

Re: OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.

Including your signature thing, there are four different forms of profanity in your post. A little unnecessary and excessive don't you think? With that said, I find it difficult to take you seriously. But I'll try my best for some comments.

I agree with stevebo.
There are so many ways to express yourself and explain your job... this is not my favourite.
Besides what Stevebo said (find some better textures, and i´ve never seen that kind of reflection on outdoor stone...it seems more like interiors tile...) there is no drama in your scene, maybe you could try a different environment and light source. It´s a good intuition to have some part strong enlighted and some other darker, you could work on it.
I like your camera shot, but you could try to force it quite a bit...

[EmilioB]

Re: OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.

hahah ermmm

well thankyou for the commments but im only 17 and i enjoy speaking like that

also my signature is the title of a song sooooooo ;D

im just fairly chilled when it comes to commenting on my renders and giving them file titles and stuff, sooo i dont really see what the issue is even though i can see the obvious profanities haha

everyone should be chilledddd haha
x

[-Keith]

Re: OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.

Hello EmilioB,

I appreciate the free spirit and welcome a chill attitude with good intentions at any time. Please understand that many of our users are accessing this site from a work computer and have bosses who are well... D#$@heads (to use language that appeals to you. ) these D#$@heads would fire them on the spot if they saw them looking at obscene posts, as such I had to clean up your post. Do you want to clean up your signature or should I? Great song and all but there are plenty other quotes from it that don't involve the f word.

[EmilioB]

Re: OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.

hahha nicely done alrami, i hadnt even seen the edits on the post until you pointed it out :P

you dont have to use swear words to appeal to me im not that socially inept where as i am only to reply if you speak my "teen language" hahah

i may only be 17 but i am fully aware of what i do haha

thanks anywayyyy x

[-Keith]

Re: OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.

Fair enough, this whole site would sink if we had to rely on my teen speak. At 25 I have already lost touch with that demographic.

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