Hi there
My latest exterior render
Please criticise hard , only way I get better
Hi!
As you wish:
Pros:
- Street looks awesome.
- Transition between paths and grass looks good to me.
Cons:
- Car shading is unconvincing and without depth of field I see no point in putting it in the scene this way. It doesn’t give nice point of reference in composition as it probably was intended to.
- Materials on the elevation of the house are “flat” and look like they do not reflect any light.
- Woman is totally bad lit and reduntant in my opinion.
- Jumping dog behind the bush is kind of funny and redundant as well.
- Grass looks like it’s a displace but still it looks flat thus we cannot see neither the translucency nor reflection of the sky in it.
That’s all that comes to my mind.
Hi there
@chartensimage Thanks for pointing it out all valid points and areas that I can work on
Kind regards
Also try to match shadows in photo and CG elements, as difference in lighting angle between different elements is quite easy to spot.
Good start. I like all the valid points made by others. The other thing I thought of when looking at this rendering is that it would be nice to see a different sun angle so that you can show off some of the set back so to the house using shadows from the sun.