Sitting area and kitchen

[glorybound]

Here is a third view of a series of images I am doing for an elder care. This interior stuff is a lot more difficult than exterior, at least for me, but I am getting better

[prateekvishwa]

ok, i think you really need to do something with the lights.. they r looking flat white.. so if you are using vray light material.. may b use some texture thr.. Also, i think reflection of lights on ceiling wood need to be controlled.. it is distracting.. overall i think it can be improved but you are getting better for sure

[plastic]

Hi,
It’s not bad as a render, but there is a lot of potential for photoshop here. If you don’t mind, here is my try.
What I noticed, the lights should have a different color than the outside, more orange. It would look nice and moody if the outside was darker, like dawn.

[glorybound]

I used a photo, as a reference, for the lights. I’ll work on the image, when I get some time. Thanks Marc; does everyone agree that Marc’s improved the image?

[dlparisi]

Yeah, marc’s image looks better. I think the problem with the lights is that besides being too white, they glow white as well. In the lights in your sample image, the glow from them is much smaller and is a nice yellow/orange. In addition the where the lights in the image are not pure white they also go the same yellow/orange. Maybe a falloff map in the vraylight material would help to achieve this.

[glorybound]

Updated interior lobby

Here is an update

[Neilg]

It’s looking good
Could do with being a little brighter in places though - I’d push the midtones right up and paint a soft brush mask where it gets blown out.

[mmikee]

Wow, what an amazing improvement. Nice work.

Regards,
Mike

[glorybound]

Thanks, guys!