my first render with vray - some C & C please

[shelsby]

Hi this is my first post and my first render using vray. I've obviously been practicing ever since I got Vray and I would appreciate some C & C's to see if I'm heading in the right direction.

Thanks

Steve

[nvanherpt]

Re: my first render with vray - some C & C please

to see if I'm heading in the right direction

i think you've arrived! great stuff

[priad]

Yep! Very good render

[Jean-Brad]

nice Job!

[tricky]

Some good work there. However, it highlights the eternal problem with these apartment-type shots: that being, "where can I put my camera to achieve a nice, open, airy composition?"

I always find that spaces look deceptively tight when viewed through a Max camera - wide angles rarely help.

[shelsby]

thanks for the comments guys, was a bit nervous with this first posting as the standard of work on here is so high

kind regards

steve

[momentum]

Very cool, looks good . A problem I find I have is that at the back of an appartment it gets dark. I see this in yours. What I do is turn on a couple of those lights you have fitings for. I would turn a couple on in the kitchen and in the hall to just add a little more ilumination to those areas.

Great job for a first post, my first couple of projects were not lit as well as yours is

[shelsby]

Some good work there. However, it highlights the eternal problem with these apartment-type shots: that being, "where can I put my camera to achieve a nice, open, airy composition?"

I always find that spaces look deceptively tight when viewed through a Max camera - wide angles rarely help.

hi tricky, totally agree with you on this point. I've played with the camera lens angle and postion so much on this job its untrue...that said, its a typicle english apartment - v.v.v. small and not cheap!!

thanks for your comments

kind regards

steve

[olitech]

Wow! excellent!
How'd you get that London flat to look so huuuuge?

Only crit is the grey windows in the last image...probably just overlooked
Oh ya, and the glasses look 'smoked' in the first

[jujubee]

thanks for the comments guys, was a bit nervous with this first posting as the standard of work on here is so high

Just ignore them... Oh yeah - great work. Just the glasse and ceiling likgths need some fixing.

[natty]

Not bad steve .. I was in Liverpool last week ....cold and wet

[shelsby]

hi natty,

sounds like a fairly normal day in Liverpool....today was pretty good though...Everton got beat by WIGAN!!!

thanks again for all you kind comments

Regards

Steve

[tricky]

Everton got beat by Wigan? I'll never hear the end of that from my Wife's sister - big Wigan fan! Still, I'd rather be supporting a 1st Division team anyway - proper football!