Internal Apartment :: Crits Wanted

[sv]

we are just about to finish these, so if people could crit them that would help us improve them!

(*) There is supposed to be a cupboard below the TV which the TV slides down into.




thanks!

[pengo]

very very nice image as always

congratulations

[gfa2]

Only thing I really see is that light fixture in the 2nd image doesn't seem like it would cast such a bright spot on the ceiling, and not in a circle either. Nice images.

Oh, maybe some books and stuff on the shelves too.

[mcvltd]

Really nice SV. Definately think it's needs books and things on the shelves but that's about it. Good work!

[sv]

cheers guys; the client has actually specified no books as they want that 'just moved in' feel, or like you have a blank canvas to play with.
i might suggest it however.

gfa2; think your right about that light, but they are all VraySphere lights so i presume the intensity is all correct. I'll have a play around.

[gfa2]

they are all VraySphere lights so i presume the intensity is all correct.

That's cool...it's just that the bulbs are really tiny little things but the light they are giving off is pretty intense.

[jacksc02]

looks good SV.
Maybe its a bit too dark overall. it doesnt have an inviting feel.
The blow out from the spots on the floor in the first image are a bit strong.
Your furniture and materials are all good though!

[paulison]

looking nice. Looks a bit blurry to me though at the moment which may be due to the resolution rendered out at.. ?

i agree about it being a touch too dark so maybe it needs a few more feature lights

[Yohan]

Looking good, a few comments:

First image:
If you look at the spots in the roof they are very dark, but the floor beneath it is very (imo too bright).
I would lower the spots in the roof to get some warm and nice light from the fireplace.

I think that it would help if you could change the camera just a bit so that when you look at the mirror,
it reflects a bit of the outdoor environment. (But I understand if you dont want to move the camera at this stage, when the cameras position works fine with all other objects)
Or put a painting or something on the empty wall that it reflects. Because I couldnt se what it was at first..


Second image:
I also think that the highlight on the roof seems strange.
nice work

Overall a really great job with the furnitures. Also like the outdoor env.

[MHenry]

Nice Renderings!

My only crits are:
The top image seems a little to saturated IMO and the light being cast on the ceiling from the chandelier seem to strong and to perfectly round. I would think there would be sevearl smaller and weaker points of light being cast on to the ceiling from the chandelier.

Really nice job overall.