wip- exterior-updated

[giraffe]

still working on the scene-not finihed yet...
wanted to share it with you so I can achieve a better result.
all your c&c are welcome

[reza]

?????

what happen? ive seen your work before...and it was very good...i guess this is a very early wip...hehehe.

aa needs work...water material is available somewhere int the forum...and you could improve the lights..looks a little bit washed out...

[giraffe]

yes it is a very early wip- dont worry.
I just wanted to send it so I can get feedback about lighting and camera angle or any other stuff while I am still working.
because otherwise, I always have too little time to make changes...

I have a problem with AA. when I use image sampling - adaptive or fixed rate- image gets too flat. cellular map on the walls dissappear etc...
this always happens in my scenes. I dont know how to make it better-working on that....
here is the anti-aliased image:

[giraffe]

here is an update:

[dusan]

uh, it still looks a little washed out, mainly the front wall somehow, it doesnt seem that one part is closer.

[kpavlov]

I like your grass. Is that displacement?

[Matt_3D]

Pool water is looking good, but for some reason the pools seems really shallow. You may need to place a 'no diving' sign or someone may get injured

-Matt

[giraffe]

thanks for your replies

the grass is displacement.

yeah the water looks shallow I guess this is due to refraction. the same happens near a real pool too.

about washed out: I cant fix the problem. when I make it darker then the whole image goes darker...and the image is no more a birght sunny day.
I will work on that more...

[stellar]

I think the main problem is that almost everything in the composition receives direct light.

Personally I would try rotating the sun about 170-180 degrees (assuming it is targeted) so that the main facade wont get direct light, would cast shadows on grass and create more dark/bright variety.