Beautifull women

[Bigguns]

The tip of the nose seems less soft then the rest you mean ? In fact mostly lime the rest and it should be a bit more softer then the rest. Ill see if i can do something about that.

[folkevall]

Very nice.

[Bigguns]

Thank's man

A new ponytail, with shorter forehead ( I like woman with short forehead ^^ ) and I corrected the nostril, added some more assymetry to the ears, rotated the eyelids of 6 degree's outward ( and I had to replace the lacrymal liquid etc.. apin in the a$$ ) I'll do a shirt, probably a V-neck black one to see how it look's on her. After that I will finish the diffuse, removing some edges and some tweak on her chest, etc. Finally gonna add back some make up

Also, when I'm fixed with wich iris I go for, I will tweak it to the max with displacement etc so it should look better in the end. Green eyes, brown, light brown, yellowish ? Wich colors guy's ^^ what's you'r tough on that?

[joconnell]

Nearly done - just for the fun set up an online dating profile with the render

[AJ Jefferies]

Again, this is looking incredible.

I don't know if it's the lack of makeup, something with her eyelashes or the lighting but here eyelids look weirdly over bright at the edge of the top tarsal plates. To me, it feelds like there should be more shadowing around this area.

I've done a quick and dirty paint over to show what I mean



As for eye colour, I actually really like the hazel brown but if you're not so keen on it my vote would be more of a green/blue

[MoonDoggie]

Bigguns, maybe a little bit of specular shine on the ponytail would help just a little bit. The upper hair looks incredible and a bit of spec to separate the strands on the ponytail would possibly help. (Very slight change)

[Bigguns]

Al : Not sure I understand what you mean sorry ^^ Maybe it just depend on the lighting..

MoonDoggie: The ponytail was quickly done, she needed refinement, I'm working on it now, doing some render test to see how it will look, I added more strand and more overlap and twisted it more. I will post when I have something to show.

For now, here's a new render. Fixed the iris wich was too saturated and added a really basic cloth just to have an idea if it suit her well and I changed the lighing, took back the older one. Also the hair at the top I modified some stuff, added more strands,etc but I have little tweaks to do to it. Also I put less hairs.. no sure about it, need more tests to see...

[AJ Jefferies]

Al : Not sure I understand what you mean sorry ^^ Maybe it just depend on the lighting..

It probably is the lighting but the skin still looks overbright through the eyelashes. Maybe a side by side comparison will help explain what I mean.

[Bigguns]

ha ok you mean the top eyelid.. I was looking at the bottom lol. Yeah the lighting does help because it's lighting it up. but the diffuse has something to correct there a bit, but most of the effect is coming from these 2 lighting. but I will make more test to it thank's. Maybe it need more eyelash..

[bardo]

Incredible job Bigguns. Really impressive. For me you should stop now...and it's perfect...

in any case, if you want to go on... I'll wait for the "full body" development images...

Is it forum PEGI rated ?

[Bigguns]

I'm near the end so I will finish it well

ok, here's an update.

I started a REALLY basic cloth just to see how it would fit.. and tweaked the ponytails (those floffy hairs are going through the neck.. gonna fix it ) I tweaked a bit the lower lip, etc. I need to fix the diffuse in the chest area of course.. still little fix to do here and there but it's getting there.

[waaazoo]

Your beautifull woman is really.... beautifull !
I love the hair, the lighting....; again a very nice render you did.
Can't wait to see more. Keep up the very nice work !

[rivoli]

this is brilliant, love the new lighting. great update.

[bmcaff]

Yep, new lighting is a big lift. A touch more red/magenta in the darker tones would add some warmth in the shadows where it's a little grey... Totally subjective I know! Really impressive work overall, congrats.

[Nicinus]

And what a beautiful nose!

I would love to see her with some form of expression, like a smile or frown or surprised look or something. Maybe that could add even further to the realism?